"Where all you little snow bunnies coming from?" is a good line, dude, thanks. Rhythmic, seasonal, symbolic--congrats! But let's try not to let the line actually dribble out your mouth at eight in the morning as full grown women on their way to work pass by. Go put it in a poem. Better yet, let me put it in my poem.


Blogger Nada said...

It's funny, but my mother's favorite thing to say to me is, "Put THAT in your poem!"

She "gets" it.

18 December, 2008  

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